Tuesday, August 3, 2010

All I just said was not enough

All I just said was not enough, telling you all was so tough,
I still don't believe you turned up, Felt it so good, no more rough  


I've been wanting to say for so long,
I've been wanting to mean no wrong,
I've been feeling it so strong
I'd want you to stay along

All I just said was not enough, telling you all was so tough
I'm glad you came to meet, Felt it so good, no more rough

Telling you all was not so full,
And stories of past was just a pull,
You heard it all like a mull,
You seemed so grown, so cool

All I just said was not enough, talking to you was no more tough
I might have been dumb telling all, Felt it so good, no more rough

I hope my words didn't make you feel bad,
I tried to use whatever words I had,
What can I say, I am just a lad,
Just talk if need, but don't be mad,

All I just said was not enough, telling you more won't be tough
I'd love to tell you more, Would feel so fine, no more rough

3 comments:

Aditi Rindani said...

heyyy its a good effort, very much poetic and rhythmical.. all the best.. keep writing.. i m in love with ur plain and lucid style of jotting down things..

Megha Patel said...

Hey that's very nice. Now who is she?????????????????????????????

Jay Bhatt said...

@Aditi : Thanks for the complement, however I am still to recognize you.

@Megha: Yes you bet it is very nice. She's a girl.. ha ha ha...